tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post58130368450360141..comments2023-06-16T11:22:21.497-04:00Comments on Beauty: Chapter 01: The Good LifeDaijahVhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-59310304334391837102013-09-22T10:37:40.589-04:002013-09-22T10:37:40.589-04:00It should be fun. My first "real" attemp...It should be fun. My first "real" attempt at romance lol although my other stories have the element. I hope you do enjoy it!<br /><br />Thank you for reading :)DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-48270729957529070242013-09-21T05:39:08.072-04:002013-09-21T05:39:08.072-04:00I will enjoy this I am sure. The pictures are bea...I will enjoy this I am sure. The pictures are beautiful as are the characters. Zhippidyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12570869365967598793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-67187306117370771892013-06-14T10:32:13.069-04:002013-06-14T10:32:13.069-04:00Yay! And yes, I was trying for a twist of both Pha...Yay! And yes, I was trying for a twist of both Phantom and Beauty because they are similar in ways and I like elements of both that I thought would work well together. I am very happy to know you are enjoying it as well!<br /><br />Thank you for reading :)DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-78690715769633425602013-06-13T17:08:27.086-04:002013-06-13T17:08:27.086-04:00I just started reading this Dj...and I am gonna ke...I just started reading this Dj...and I am gonna keep on reading...I sense this is similar to Phantom of the Opera....I wonder how this ends up....ksmommahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07137083853752975679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-19271317405933814962013-05-21T09:02:30.416-04:002013-05-21T09:02:30.416-04:00Blake is a gentle spirit and knows a lot about a l...Blake is a gentle spirit and knows a lot about a lot. Living under the college he's had a lot of time to listen in on classes. He does have great insight on the world around him that's for sure. The solitude does help with connecting emotionally to the things that happen around him. Interesting! I've actually never seen that movie though but that is very much how Natalie's life is. It's not hers to live at the moment but she is definitely looking to change all that!<br /><br />Thank you for reading :)DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-10518038432930407822013-05-19T21:36:56.288-04:002013-05-19T21:36:56.288-04:00Just began reading, Natalie is so pretty! Blake se...Just began reading, Natalie is so pretty! Blake seems to have a high level of empathy, I suppose because he knows what it feels like to feel alone and have no one there to listen to your feelings. <br />It's funny, from this chapter, her life sort of reminds me of Allie's life from The Notebook with the tight schedule and over controlling parents. Not sure why I thought of her specifically. :)Emerainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13632155590027998895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-79207098834454301272013-04-18T12:09:21.609-04:002013-04-18T12:09:21.609-04:00Thank you! So glad you're enjoying the story s...Thank you! So glad you're enjoying the story so far. And I credit the wonderfully talented pose makers out there for helping create the imagery my mind dreams up :) Such amazing work in the community! <br /><br />Thank you for reading!DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-51719975026127635552013-04-18T11:34:22.921-04:002013-04-18T11:34:22.921-04:00This is great so far! Going to keep reading. I lov...This is great so far! Going to keep reading. I love your poses :) They make the story so much more realistic :)Amandralynnhttp://amandralynn.wordpress.com/2013/04/05/1/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-32475325082959110372013-02-22T08:04:58.575-05:002013-02-22T08:04:58.575-05:00Lol he is and the sad thing about that is he's...Lol he is and the sad thing about that is he's creeping himself out by "not stalking" this poor girl.<br /><br />I think there are so very few similarities besides the slinking around underground, hiding from the world, loner/romantic, artistic thing. :D<br /><br />Very true! They believe they know what's best for her and don't seem to ever want to hear her opinion about her own life and that will very soon turn against them. The more she's around free spirits and sees how to be herself the more she learns of her own independence!<br /><br />Yes! It's a sad reality unfortunately and one that always has devastating outcomes for many involved. I mean, your best friend? Why would they ever want to hurt you in that way?<br /><br />Thank you for reading :D DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-44391523004309878992013-02-19T13:18:10.999-05:002013-02-19T13:18:10.999-05:00reading...
BF is kind of creepy, but not in a tota...reading...<br />BF is kind of creepy, but not in a totally horrid way.<br /><br />The phantom mask has me intrigued to see if you threw in some similarities.<br /><br />So many girls are in Natalie's shoes. If her parents don't watch it, she'll explode one day and make them see the consequences of their overbearing actions as she totally defies them. That, or I'm starting to ramble.<br /><br />Oh, don't even get me started on the whole cheating with the best friend thing. That's way too common for my liking as well unfortunately. Makes me want to claw their eyes out.<br /><br />Now, on to more! *growls ravenously*mypalsim1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08612512921461620603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-36160736630688404662013-01-24T08:27:36.913-05:002013-01-24T08:27:36.913-05:00Thank you :) Yes, that was him. He heard the music...Thank you :) Yes, that was him. He heard the music from the tunnels and followed it topside and saw her with her friends. After that he wanted to know who she was and so he tracked her home. Something he'll soon come to realize he should have never done. Thank you for that Misty :) I'm very happy to know you're enjoying it! Thank you for reading!DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-13827089408896123772013-01-24T01:41:12.650-05:002013-01-24T01:41:12.650-05:00Girl you are such a great writer! I'm interest...Girl you are such a great writer! I'm interested already. So was Blake the mysterious shadow? His diary entries don't seem to indicate that for certain. Oh--and I loved her diary page! You also have excellently put together the scenery and surroundings. Very nice. Will catch the next chapter tomorrow :) <br /><br />~Misty{ℳ}https://www.blogger.com/profile/02869880226899470327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-22992324422222335052013-01-23T14:37:47.333-05:002013-01-23T14:37:47.333-05:00That's exactly Estelle. She's her only chi...That's exactly Estelle. She's her only child and her mother is VERY controlling. She is in every aspect of Natalie's life and the poor girl is stifled!<br /><br />He is a deep, thought provoking kind of person with a big heart. Yes that's it, one of those uppity posh people that look down on him because of his appearance.<br /><br />Thank you for reading :)DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-12487867473562824852013-01-23T13:01:24.083-05:002013-01-23T13:01:24.083-05:00Nat is beautiful and very talented it seems. Her m...Nat is beautiful and very talented it seems. Her mom tells her when to go to bed...really? I'm guessing she is one of those parents who pull strings?<br />Blake is a very interesting character, and a bit of an odd ball. Wondering what he meant by she is one of them? One of the rich people?<br /><br />I'm likin' it!...edenz~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-27627615707334745872013-01-21T22:40:24.040-05:002013-01-21T22:40:24.040-05:00Haha yeah he is a very sad, tormented person that ...Haha yeah he is a very sad, tormented person that has a penchant for art and music. Finding Natalie is the beginning of the end for him unfortunately. He is about to get a wake up call he could have lived without. He submits himself to the underbelly of the city to keep from harming people as we'll soon learn. He doesn't trust himself around others.<br /><br />LOL WOW that's a bit extreme, no? HAHAHAHAHAHA tell us how you really feel Meeks :P Yeah she is a little...hard to deal with. Welcome to Natalie's world!DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-70858559457061758122013-01-21T22:31:06.175-05:002013-01-21T22:31:06.175-05:00aww he's Phantom!!!! I love Phantom of the ope...aww he's Phantom!!!! I love Phantom of the opera and that's him only hopefully not as mean and crazy but still tormented. He's already smitten with Nat, that hopefully will be a good thing. What happened why is he living in a dungeon?<br /><br />Um Nat's mom needs to be shot. I think her facelift was pulled too tight because she is seriously an up tight bitch!<br /><br />jazenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02791862222656796075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-14504253253590793972013-01-21T22:16:53.942-05:002013-01-21T22:16:53.942-05:00Thank you! Yes, Natalie's mom is a wound reall...Thank you! Yes, Natalie's mom is a wound really tight. She has the leash wrapped around her daughter just as securely too and poor Natalie is just following her right along :( <br /><br />Riley is a real dirt stain. There's a small twist to his cheating that hurt her even more. Perhaps something painful should befall him!<br /><br />LOL I hope he does! He plays a very important role for Natalie. :)<br /><br />Thank you for reading!DaijahVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685128767947355934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6633707279018125987.post-24442294255808937942013-01-21T22:07:49.998-05:002013-01-21T22:07:49.998-05:00I like it already! Natalie's mom is a right wh...I like it already! Natalie's mom is a right what-not, isn't she? And Riley should be beaten, cheating is a horrible thing to do to someone. <br /><br />As for creepy mysterious stranger, I'm not sure how I feel about him just yet but I'm sure he'll grow on me.GabrielleMoosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02872468085592936030noreply@blogger.com